All Comments on 'Ashley's Campaign Ch. 13'

even though what happened with ashley is wrong on so many levels..i love it..thanks man for writing them..great job done..i dont think it needs a new chapter..this is a perfect ending..but you are not gonna end here..she is gonna get pregnant so do something about that..

Then condense this to about 3 chapters and have an okay story. As it sits it's SO boring that I'm done.

please dont get het pregnat :o

otherwise great stuff in this series :)

This is my favorite series on literotica. I missed the deadline to submit it to the Reader's Choice Awards, but based on what I've read that's out there, it deserves it.

This chapter could've been the hottest one yet for me, but when Kyle's mother was introduced, I wasn't at all imagining an attractive person, so I had a hard time reconciling your description of her in this with that mental image, and, along with the intrinsic ickiness of incest, those bits proved to be considerable turn-offs.

(For some reason though, when Ashley considers fucking her dad or brother, it's still quite a turn on for me. I think her fitting my beau ideal pretty much makes anything she does really hot.)

Anyway, please keep it up. As always, I'm sitting on the edge waiting for the next chapter to come out.

This story only gets better I would like to offer some ideas for future chapters I think kyle and Zach have had enough fun and maybe it is time they both went back to jail but before they do they could help Ashley get the drugs into Elle bedroom for the police to find but in doing this both brothers get double crossed and end up in jail.

I tried to stick with it n hoped it got better, but there jus kept being so many unbelievable situations. Her friends not seeing changes in her life, her brother not getting mad n do8ng something, her "lesbian" friend that all of the sudden jus loves dick n puts her in situations to get raped but doesn't seem sorry about it or jus wants her to do more "adventurous things". A d.a. n police chief doing g such illegal things in the open, a dad who jus let's his daughter become a stripping slut, I can keep going but I just couldn't take anymore even though it started good n promising but I think by the deformed uncle rape that turned into a nightmare was around the start of the downfall for me. A lil realism is what makes the good stories do good or at least to me