All Comments on 'Ashley's Fantasies Ch. 04'

I love your writing. Also the idea of one girl naked in a room full of clothed women. Is one of my greatest fantasies. For Ashley i would love to see her in a outdoor setting. It feels safe in door but outdoors you feel even more venerable.

So many directions in the beginning, poor girl. nicely explained later to my satisfaction. The most arousing however are the hands helping her to bend to their will. The increasing number of voyeurs during her arousal was very erotic, and I wanted to be amongst them. Did Ms Tate really violate Ashley, could the studio violate her, she wanted this and she gets what she wants. (Line from coolhand luke, sorry). She is more or less willing to continue for five orgasms.

I also enjoyed the very direct and stark direction that she received and what is expected of her. As I was imersed in the story Ms. became Mr. and also excited me to think I may be more like minded with lesbians, though I like the idea of controling my lover much like this story does. Sorry I'm just thinking out loud. I look forward to your new series of controling a less willing girl, with some consents on her part, with many women to help her discover a new arousal. Know one wants to see this (me) but what an erotic position to discover oneself to be in. `*~*`

Happy writings

Not only is this one of your 2 best stories (I've read all of Ashley's Fantasies & Showing Nicole), this is easily in the top 10 best stories I've read at Literoica or other stories sites. I'm not sure which was the stronger part, 3 or 4, but at least one of them would make my top 5 must-reads. I love what you're doing with the cfnf genre (one of my favourites; I've written some along similar lines but posted nothing online). Myself, I'd love to read more about Ashley & the aftermath of her photoshoot when her pics & video go online; who saw her, how popular were her photos, did she shoot more, did she shoot in a public or semi-public setting, did anyone back home, teachers, neighbors, baristas, etc., recognize her from the shoot? Those are the themes I play with my protagonist and am always curious when someone else plays with similar scenarios. :D

I really loved this, the slow build up was incredible.

The only thing I can think of that would have improved it would have been to include some of the photos taken during the shoot, that would have turned it from wonderful to incredible !

But it was worth 5 stars, well worth it !

Great story... You captured every detail superbly. Please write an outdoor scene for Ashley.

Intensity in 10 cities !!!!!!!!!!

Now that was HOT !

Talk about a long slow build up and then WHAM !

A brilliant chapter.

5 Stars does not do it justice.

Rapier