All Comments on 'Ashley's Journey'

by Jwhit2009

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
" I watched the surreal seen before me."

It's hard to get past mistakes like the one above.

boaman007boaman007over 10 years ago
Thanks

Awesome story very well paced and I enjoyed the way you developed things!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Too many errors

And lacking a compelling story, in the end, I simply didn't care what happened to them.

TornadoTysTornadoTysover 10 years ago
Different !

Husband seemed to be be in some conflict on how to handle his wife. The wife it seems had quite a few secrets even while they are married.

The story got there in the end.

Pleasant read

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Author in deep rut

4 stories, mate gets banged each time: predictable, unsatisfying. Try another plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow!

I loved the scene with the duck and the strawberry sauce. Who'd have thought you could get a duck that far in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pretty good story...

But,one little annoyance....if you look at a something it is called a scene not a seen!

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Won't

After this piece of garbage, I won't bother with any of the others.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Too long story...

Her description was a hot wife, that was the alluring content of this tale..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

:)

FantaS69FantaS69over 2 years ago

So hot! I think I made myself cum about a dozen times just reading this! Thank you!

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