All Comments on 'Ashley's Modeling Shoot Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Interesting. Makes me wonder where this is going. Hope to see another chapter soon....Jim

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
where now?

looks like this is a start to a good session. There is more to come isn't there???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
good story

Excellent start to a story, more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

excellent setup...really look forward to the next part

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Rather banal start

The start is like something out of "The Pearl" I hope the plot and the language get modernised

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great! Go on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
..

Please do post the rest of it

DrLucindaXDrLucindaXover 10 years ago
Finish this!

Yes! Please finish this story! Would love to see her reluctant climax!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Bring on the next chapter

Awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ever going to finish?

I would love to see this story finished! Any chance you'll give us another chapter?

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