All Comments on 'Ashley's Public Exposure Ch. 02'

Omg How old are you? This is incredibly childish writing. Not even a shred of sex interest. Keep your day job if you're out of grade school. YUCK

Has several fetishes, which is good. Writing could use a little work, almost couldnt tell who was talking. Also ignore that comment from that fool before me, he clearly doesnt know what he is talking about, makes me think he is a kid, who is clearly underage.

Love the continuous descriptive writing. Maybe add a bit of a ramp up stripping away her clothing a bit slower in the beginning to build up the erotic suspense. It was a quick read but I enjoyed it. Please keep delivering.

I love your story, a new chapter please!

Title says it! Great story and looking forward for more.

This story is so unrealistic, that it's fucking hilarious.

This reads like it’s been written by a child, the story moves to fast, very very unrealistic, I can’t tell who’s talking half the time, or what’s going on

more please

Next chapter??

When’s the next chapter??