All Comments on 'Ashley's Tale 02'

but that is what the category is supposed to be about. Fairly well written; thanks.

Many of your other works are also well written, like this series. The Jezebel series had me entertained for quite a while. This site is supposed to be for 'erotica' and all, but good stories are even better for the pure enjoyment of it. Sure, my imagination takes some liberties at times, painting in the details of the mental picture, that is what reading is for. If you give enough detail to round out the characters and the situation there are several minutes where the conditions around the reader disappear and we truly are transported some where else for a short while. Please do keep up the story side of your work, and let the relationships develop slowly, the rest will take care of itself. Thanks for sharing all of these stories with us the readers.

:)