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Click hereNow I'm seeing a teacher at the same school in which I coach. We get along great. She's pretty, but she's not way out of my league like a lot of the girls I've dated. She also doesn't have the same fascination for black men that the girls who knew Ty do. That's a huge plus.
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Anonymousover 4 years agoI do not remember labeling a story a waste of time -- until now.
Why do I want to read about a fictional hot white slut girl with a black fixation?
Especially when there is no build-up to a point of conflict that requires resolving. Plus the narrator is not even a part of the action (inaction), having just a chatting acquaintance with hot slut girl that does not include showing us the emotions involved. So we do not particularly feel involved in (and therefore do not care about) her life.
Years ago I read about the sexual shenanigans in Olympic Village and I WAS interested, because that is a slice of real life, and because I was not jaded from years of reading Literotica.
heftylefty55 is actually a fairly good writer -- if he had something to write about.
So maybe he should come up with a plot that is actually interesting, and try again.
Paul in Oklahoma
Anonymousover 6 years agoThe sex eas passable but this idea that as soon as a hot girl sees a huge black cock, she’ll lose her fucking marbles is...ridiculous.
Not that some girls wouldnt trade sex for security or be attracted to black guys; but ALL OF THEM? Or the idea that fidelity and monogamy are out the window at the sight of a BBC.
Give your damn head a shake.
melmankkover 6 years agoI really enjoyed it, having an outside perspective was a positive for me and did not distract or move me further away from the story. Looking forward to more stories in the future if you decide to keep it up.
Also dont let the rascist deter you, if they really felt that way they wouldnt be reading and commenting on interracial stories.
heftylefty55over 6 years agoAuthor@Bit Dull
Thanks for the feedback. With the thousands of stories here from a 1st or 2nd person POV, I don't think submitting one from the 3rd person is too out of line. I'm sorry that you didn't like the perspective I chose to write from, hopefully you read another story here before you give up. Basing your assumption on a person's sexuality on a ~4,000 word piece of fiction probably isn't healthy.
