All Comments on 'Asian Adventures Ch. 08'

by tcwild100

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Nice story but you messed up on getting your prolog and chapters straight. I think you more or less combined the prolog and Ch. 1 -- Not sure if the titles are labeled correctly.

All ment to be constructive criticism.

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