All Comments on 'Ask Alice Ch. 05'

Could we have a bit of proofreading? It detracted some from a creative (colorful?) story. You do have an imagination!

Thanks for the encouraging comment. As to proofreading? Sorry .... it's apparent I've been going it alone. If I had to go to court I'd be that fool that defends himself. I'm a bit of a technophobe and I find the process of finding an editor a bit daunting. I can't tell you how long it took me to figure out how to post a story That alone was a huge triumph for me.