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All Comments on 'Aspiring Director Ch. 01'

by Sean Murray

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Not bad

Rathe slow and too much extraneous self-indulgence. Balance between realism and fantasy not right yet

lorencinolorencinoalmost 16 years ago
Teasing, richly layered weave of sexuality

I think it's a great story so far.

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