All Comments on 'Assassin Ch. 01'

Quite an imaginative story. Well written, excellent first representation of your talent.

What a breath of fresh air! I continue to read stories on Literotica hoping to find someone who is comfortable outside the box. You qualify in spades...Bravo!!

I love it. Very different.Keep going

That balance between lust, i.e. the mind, and the body's rushing needs was marvellous. Thank you. Roger.

I read a lot of stories which are all about the same. This was so off the wall, I'm going to read all your work, brilliant, blah, blah, boring same kind of dull praise everyone heaps on.