All Comments on 'Assassin Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Too cruel to be pleasing

It´s one thing to take ones revenge but it is quite something else to prolong the pain and this chapter was not enjoyable at all!

ByXexualByXexualalmost 12 years ago
Pretty good

i personally found the story exhilarating though it does seem to get a little needlessly rough near the end. ur one of my favorite authors and this is a worthy entry in the series. keep it up!

lemmethinklemmethinkalmost 12 years ago
A Different Kind of Happy Ending

Great chapter. I could picture the entire scene, and feel the breath leave my chest. I love the characters and how at the end, Elene helped Violet reach her happy ending. Keep it up!

alabasterdreamalabasterdreamover 11 years ago
Hot

I'm sorry, but this story is HOT. I've always loved breath play and this story sort of pushes all the right buttons for me. It takes it far further than I ever would in the real world, but this IS a fantasy, after all.

Please, tell me this isn't the end of the series!

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