All Comments on 'Assassin Ch. 05'

Excellent story. Please continue.

Good story but its not erotic - should be in nonerotic - five chapters and she kind of got fingered? Don't think this is in the right category, seems like you want to set up something to happen but it doesn't.

Yes, keep them coming....erotic is fine...but violence and excitement is good too..Perhaps a bit more sex wouldn't come amiss...whatsayu?

A great story doesn't have to have the "sex" in the first few chapters.Most of the truly great stories on here use the tension of build up .Loving your work so far and can't wait for further chapters.

Thanks for sharing.