All Comments on 'Assault on a Nudist Camp'

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Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
Teenager "woes"

LOL....this is was fun read! I enjoyed ever moment of it!

~Honey

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Funny

Someone has the teenage hormones a little late but very enjoyable read!

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinalmost 19 years ago
If it weren't for bad luck...

...young Jerry would have no luck at all. The story is an interesting concept with a lot of possibilities but, IMHO, it needs a few more edits.

Rumple

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
hilarious!

This is the funniest "erotic" story I have ever read.

OhMissScarlettOhMissScarlettalmost 19 years ago
Oh! Too funny!

I think this was my fave of all your submissions this time around. Hilarious and with an important lesson: Be careful with your worm. -S.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 11 years ago
Be careful what you wish for

The lengths some teenage boys will go to see a naked female--always interesting, and sometimes hilarious, as told in this story.

B_BaileyB_Baileyabout 7 years ago
Memories

Funny how a story will bring back old memories. Thanks for the reminder of our youth.

ausvirgoausvirgoover 3 years ago

Loved it!

had a good laugh at Jerry's expense.

It's a shame though that our prudish society creates such personalities.

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