All Comments on 'Assigned Seating'

Could there be more? 5 stars! Hope there's more!

And, all done without any explicit sexual details. Didn't think that was possible, but I'm amazed. Great job.

wtf where is the rest?did they just have a summer fling or did they have a long term thing?

Excellent detailing and pacing development -- which are realized further from your Ch 1 Escape at Sea. No problem with the conclusion; it's not abrupt or incomplete, but an appropriate tease to imagine what's more.

I agree with rebellion75

This needs more as to what Hazel's summer with Diana entails. Also, maybe insight to the true relationship of mother and Diana.

The story does not need any more. You showed excellent taste and finished it at exactly the right place---let those who want more use their own imaginations. Sometimes it's better that way.

well written and leaves the door open for more.

Mmm this was nice. Wish it were a bit longer. I would've loved to read more of Hazel's summer with Diana.

Have more sensual & seductive words ever been written on Lit? Wouldn’t we all like to have a Diana (or Hazel) in our lives? This short piece is beautifully written, elegant, open ended. You do leave us writers hanging a bit with the ending. Obviously mothers know all, and is onto Hazel, but did or didn’t anything happen between Hazel’s mom & Diana? Hazel blanking at the thought was hilarious btw. And what happened after the summer? Did they remain lovers? - Please continue this story ;-)

The only part of the story that I liked was the seduction scene after dinner.

You made me use my imagination by the way that you were telling about it.

I could almost see hazel pulling diana's panties down with her teeth and the way that diana's pussy looks when she was doing it

My imagination was running wild thinking about the wet moist slit between her legs and the musky aroma of her pussy was intoxicating in my imagination

Only then I realized that it was my pussy that I was smelling as I was reading the story and playing with my pussy as I was reading it