All Comments on 'Asuki, Stepmother and Mistress'

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Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Well that is a start

This could be a very hot story. Chapters need to be longer than one page for a good read though. A description of the characters helps with the mind picture. I hope they can be a very loving couple eventually.

redlion75redlion75over 6 years ago

A fucking pussy that can't stand up for himself

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Where?

Where is the rest?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
???

Uhm... Ok? Story???

rdoolittlerdoolittleover 6 years ago
More please

Not a bad start...go on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

can't wait for the next part. go on...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
waiting for update.

i am really waiting for next part. update part 2.

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 5 years ago
More please

I wonder if you might like to finish this story. Good read so far and possibly leading up to a sexy romp with stepmommy.

MasterMickaMasterMickaover 3 years ago

Y a t'il une suite?

Catman290Catman290over 2 years ago

Sooo it ends where the fun begins with no sequel? Damn this was a good tease.

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