by braindump
Thoroughly disgusting. There is nothing erotic about hideous crime and torture.
This is the noncon section. Don't read noncon stories if you're gonna be such a pussy about it.
i have to agree there are fantasies and then there are physchos you sir are in need of some help professional help,
WOW!! This was so sick it had me hard as a rock. Want another one.
Great story! Very erotic! Need a second chapter with rapist coming back when husband goes back out on business for a very long very sensual round two... and round three....and round four..... every day when the kids go to school.
I don't care for rape...I like "reluctance" and I just feel the knife made it a lil over the top. It kinda sent it from noncon/reluctance to "oh my gosh!" As a mother it made me nervous. I kept trying to think of ways for her to escape or trying to record him so she'd have proof it was against her will & schedule a sitter & go to the police as soon as he left. They could help change the family's identity & relocate them since he was a stalker too....so all because of one lil object, I went from enjoying your work, to stressing myself sick. I want a 2nd chapter just to know if she calls the cops. Know what I mean? It was very well written. I look forward to reading more of your stuff if you have anything without knives. You're a fantastic writer and I hope you take our suggestions to heart.
In response first to a few earlier comments, I was very pleased that it was NOT her husband, the fact that her kids were to come home from school was a turn on for me and lastly........the the first woman that commented, fuck the police.......this housewife/mommy deserves even more use. To the writer, my compliments, finally someone on this site to have the "balls" to write about sex and true fear. Keep writing........I'm sure many of us appreciate your sick mind.
Great story! Very hot. One of the best stories I have read on this site. PLEASE do a 2nd chapter where the rapist comes back for more, and more, and more..........
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