by Julie20
The story seemed to come from the inside and out. I was able to envision her well. I like the fact there was no bullshit of sweetness between them. The story made me wonder just what I would do in the father's place.
RS
I love the details. You lovingly paint and caress the detailed descriptions in your writing, making it erotic and moving. I'm drawn in because it feels believable, even if it's not realistic. I hear your voice, read your thoughts, feel your experience. So sexy, fun, and engaging to read.