by Bedu
Very enjoyable reading, hope to see more installments soon. Thanks
I'd love to see a bit more development. It's very much a fairy tale so far. The reality of everyday life (with 5 cats!) could provide an intriguing story as each of them learns to accommodate the other (not easy for these two) and their love develops from lust and infatuation to something deeper and more permanent.
Enjoyable, good writing and, praise God, good editing. More please but, yes, how does this translate for the people beyond two days.
Love this romance. I am 61 and this is quite a lovely fantasy. Keep it going...and no bad surprises.
HELL YES IT IS!!!! I have never enjoyed a story on this site the way I have this one 10 out of 5 stars
Chapter 3 you ask......that would be a big HELL YES!!! great story please keep it going with no bad surprises. All the way to chapter 100 maybe....
Hell yes, are you joking. More, more and more Please.
Wow. Wow. Excellent dialog. Witty and sexy. Good job. Another chapter, please!
I rated this part 5/5. I really enjoyed this story.
Alas, it would be hard to improve the story or even to maintain the high level of the first two parts, so unless you have some inspired ideas, perhaps a new story would be better.
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Part 3 and more are warranted! Lovely story, I like your humor as well.
More? Are you kidding me? The repartee between these two characters is beyond good. What a great story, thank you for sharing your story telling ability.
Really great writing. What a perfect relationship.
many years ago I had relationship so like this.
Loved it.