All Comments on 'At Long Last: Gwen Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great series

Very enjoyable reading, hope to see more installments soon. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

New installment? Hell yes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yes Please!

I'd love to see a bit more development. It's very much a fairy tale so far. The reality of everyday life (with 5 cats!) could provide an intriguing story as each of them learns to accommodate the other (not easy for these two) and their love develops from lust and infatuation to something deeper and more permanent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very good.

Enjoyable, good writing and, praise God, good editing. More please but, yes, how does this translate for the people beyond two days.

in2itdeepin2itdeepover 11 years ago
Part three IS desired,

Love this romance. I am 61 and this is quite a lovely fantasy. Keep it going...and no bad surprises.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You ask if part 3 is desired?

HELL YES IT IS!!!! I have never enjoyed a story on this site the way I have this one 10 out of 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
chapter 3 and WAY beyond

Chapter 3 you ask......that would be a big HELL YES!!! great story please keep it going with no bad surprises. All the way to chapter 100 maybe....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Do we want a Chapter 3????

Hell yes, are you joking. More, more and more Please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Part 3 desired

Well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
My first comment on any post

Wow. Wow. Excellent dialog. Witty and sexy. Good job. Another chapter, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It's the perfect time to stop

I rated this part 5/5. I really enjoyed this story.

Alas, it would be hard to improve the story or even to maintain the high level of the first two parts, so unless you have some inspired ideas, perhaps a new story would be better.

b

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Absolutely!

Part 3 and more are warranted! Lovely story, I like your humor as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

More? Are you kidding me? The repartee between these two characters is beyond good. What a great story, thank you for sharing your story telling ability.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
lovely couple

Really great writing. What a perfect relationship.

many years ago I had relationship so like this.

Loved it.

buzzsawlennybuzzsawlennyabout 2 years ago

This story legit has me cracking up every few minutes...well played

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