All Comments on 'At My Window Sad and Lonely'

Thanks!

Lovely tale, well told.

Nice length too. It was not rushed.

Really liked the way you created the ending of the story as a foreshadowing of the future in context of the natural flow of the current story. Nicely done!

Loved the slow build up and the long tantalizing tease. It lets you know that this couple will have a long relationship instead of a short lived physical tryst.

I gave it five, but I would give it six if I could.