All Comments on 'At Periscope Depth'

Short on sex, but long on real world detail! Excellent job, author!

There is no USN rank of First Lt. Also, the XO would not be stooging around on the 'night shift'; he's probably sleeping. Otherwise, DAMN GOOD. PO-1 USN Ret'd

Excellent story - sexy and humourous. Well done!

Just plain fun to read, Thanks !!~~!!

Personally, a military man myself, I enjoyed the build-up more then the sex. It's not often I can read things like, "Come about to new course heading 2-7-0," on Literotica.

Saying that, you know when you get specific, you're going to get criticisms about "That ain't the way it works." Don't worry about those guys. You did a good job describing the rising action and the sex was pretty decent. It wasn't the best Voyeur story I've read but it was certainly original and an enjoyable read. I'm glad to see you tried something different and got away from The Woman Accidentally Left Her Blinds and Windows Open While She Showered stories.

Welcome to the Ex/Voy section. I hope you write more.