All Comments on 'At the Cottage Pt. 03'

Progression of story is great.

If I had been Amy's husband I would have gone and organised a divorce citing her father

I hope this story was the result of someones imagination and not reality.

Ruined it. Leave out the "eating dad's cum out of her pussy", the "two in one hole" and the "making the husband always 2nd to dad (& mom)" and try to continue if you can.

I don't and will never understand why an individual would read a story they did not like. Over the top on occasion I suppose, but then it was your story, and I liked it too. Oh, by the way, two men in a women's pussy at the same time, sublime, take it from me.

i liked it - enjoyable reading. it just was too quick - needed more story development, longer sex scenes.