by Miss Jane
Really liked it but would have liked it more if you could have described him a little. We have a description of her and can imagine a character but there was no images of him.
Wow, this is the real deal. Thank you for providing a vivid picture, and going into detail about the woman receiving pleasure.
It's so refreshing to see accounts that are intelligently written and that do not follow the boring cookie-cutter sexist style that women cannot relate to or get turned on by. Well done!
This story is much too brief, especially the romantic scene, and it ends far too abruptly. It needs to be greatly enhanced.