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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What a tease of a story

What ? No foursome ? This story ended too abruptly after leading up to what I expected to be a 4-some free-for-all. Disappointing ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
AT THE POOL

This was so bad I won't even give it one star.

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I'm just an amateur writer here to share some of my stories as I make them up. I've been reading for a while and finally decided to write (and publish) some things of my own. Hope you enjoy reading them!