All Comments on 'Atlantic City Bet'

A very nice story to start my day!

Thank you!

L

Never had a sapphic experience to “Marry me!” in one night? Suuuuuuuure.....

Cute :) first time lesbians uhaul as soon as they figure out they are gay. It does need some editing, the point of veiw gets a little confusing, I love stories that switch between characters. Their train of thought and what they are saying out loud is hard to differentiate. When they are talking it's a bit rushed, almost a run on sentence, a little conversation editing would help it flow. A little more back story about each of the women, including Linda would add a lot. Great start to a potential romantic erotic story.

Hallo linda1234!

I almost stopped reading in chapter 1! ___ But I'am so glad I didn't,,, yes.

I choose not to read stories under the heading of "Lesbian Sex" that include men! ___ Now I know one half of the population is male,,, I just don't give a fuck about that half!!!

5-Stars!

Gay Kat.