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All Comments on 'Atonement! A-B'

by SmedleyLeftwich

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AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
I thought it was a good read. You've done very well so far, --

why not continue? You set a good mood, you have a good plot and your descriptive talents are very good. I don't see why you have any doubt-have fun instead, as writing should be.

morefunnmorefunnover 14 years ago
So Far So Good

Lets see where you want to take this.

Thanks for Sharing.

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