All Comments on 'Atonement! K'

OK, the first few chapters of this were really liked, then it flagged, then it peaked, now it's flagging again. I sense from my anonymous friends that something's wrong, but if they could leave real criticism instead of hate, then I could fix the story. Maybe they're joining in and ignoring that it's a part of a serial; that would hurt the understanding. I mean yes, some of them are bridge chapters that set up better ones, but for there to be THIS MUCH "anger"... and anonymous... IDK, maybe it's one guy that doesn't like one word I used , but again if there is creative direction to discuss that discuss it.

As usual very bad. Did you ever consider ditch Digging!