All Comments on 'Au Pair Delight'

I enjoyed your story. You had a great build up and drew out the actual consummation of their combined lust much longer than most.

My only quibble is that you ended it so abruptly. You developed the characters quite well, now what happens? Does she move into their room? Was it a one time thing? Does she return at the end of the year?

With such a build up, this story deserved some conclusions too.

Thanks a heap. 5*

ttom