All Comments on 'Audrey Ch. 03'

An alpha male? Author, please, I beg you very much! Make a cuckold sissy out of this pompous, self-satisfied peacock, preferably with the cleaning of the sticky mess and the rolling of his ass. I'm just sick of his arrogance and duplicity! Hit him in the testicles properly!

Great story. The "mind and emotional" questioning are what makes it good. Thank you. Cheers.

@ anonymous 7 hrs ago, wah wah. Too bad, so sad. Unless you are a cuckold sissy yourself don't beg someone to change their style of writing to suit you. If you want it that way, write it yourself. Hatred of a nonexistent character because of an immutable characteristic is a sign of a mental defect. Seek professional guidance.

Just stupid!

Garbage. 1* To tigger119, who the fuck are you talking about? As far as mental defects, there are many that have that problem in this category and that includes the authors who post garbage.

Excellent, 5 stars

Wow! Complex characters rather than the typical one dimensional types that dominate this site.

5*

The dynamic in their relationships took a turn in this chapter that diminished what it could have become. Sarah went from a foil to Becky to an insecure, lonely woman. Still good story but it lost a little of the uniqueness I was loving up to this point. 4*

There’s some great writing involving complex human relationships here. I’m happily giving it a five star rating alone just for that reason. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️