All Comments on 'Audrey Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

great start...would love to see larry share her with some of his old friends.....then have her do some exhibitionism, dress sexy...even in class....till she gets caught by some of her student and has to perform for them also.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More please

I agree with the previous comment. A good string of setbacks should make Audrey a very sad/happy girl as Larry finds more ways for her to pay her rent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
PLEASE . . .

get someone to check your writing! You may have fantasies about teachers but you need one to check spelling (siliva!?), tenses, grammar and sentence construction. ARGH!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
share her

She should be shared and certainly anally fucked

MidniteSpankerMidniteSpankeralmost 13 years ago
Payments

Either she has fantabulously low rent or Larry pays way too much for sex. I would envision that she would be making weekly payments to larry.

Just sayin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Age

Maybe im too young but i find it hard to believe a 70 yr old could physicaly overpower a fit young woman who goes to the gym regulary. Despite the fact she is short n tipsy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

That was hot!! Audrey still has an overdue rent bill, so Larry should really get to collecting his payment. The way I see it, she owes him a fuck for every dollar not paid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved it

Great story, look forward to hearing more, definitley anal next time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Yes, continue.

Next time, how about a chapter called "A favor for Larry's younger brother"?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

i think he should have made her swaloow his load

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Why not just fuck her regularly as opposed to collecting rent?

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