All Comments on 'Aunt and Nephew Seduction Ch. 01'

So far so good!

The comment I posted earlier? The one where I detailed how badly written this story was? The one you deleted? Yeah, that one.

You can delete a comment that you don't like, but that doesn't make the comment untrue. It just means that you find it easier to edit comments than your own story.

(And as has been pointed out, many times: If you choose to believe the positive comments, you have to give just as much credence to the negative ones as well.)

You need to develop the characters alot more. Proof read yoir stories a few times, a editor won't be so bad. Also take criticism because it makes you a better writer. Facts are there will be people who likes anything and this story was....pretty bad. Just try again bud.

Pretty silly and badly written.

a lot families fuck. many do