All Comments on 'Aunt Arabel Ch. 01 - First Time'

She should be taking you for a lover and boy toy. Big asses are for licking and you could tell a long story about how you started with the aunt and continued with the cousin. Do not jump to a threesome. Build to a sex trio and have the aunt knowing you are doing the others and she has the first experiences before the younger females.

- What are you watching?

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NO!

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"What are you watching?"

Is this an alternative time like to the cousin first time (which I read first).

Into the bedroom for more fun & fucking.

What about fucking your cousin and friends

How about day 2

The writing gets sloppy we when the kids don't have class.

learn to spell

If you are going to write stories in English, you might consider taking a short course in English Grammar; as your use of such leaves a lot to be desired.

For content and subject matter I would give it 3.25 Stars.

I like the Aunt/Nephew stories and I like how this one went. Unexpectedly having sex and not planning or rushing into it. Write more like this one. Also the grammer wasn't so bad that a person of reasonable intelligence couldn't make it out.

You really have to learn the reason why speech marks were introduced to the written text.

DAM IF I DIDNT KNOW BETTER I WOULD SAY SOMONE WAS TAKEN NOTES A FEW YEARS BACK WHEN I MET UP WITH MY AUNT. THANKS BILL

Man you are doing fine combine this one with your cousin. But keep it unexpected