All Comments on 'Aunt Charlotte'

category on this site but This is nearly the futher thing from Humor & Satire I have read on Literorica.

but in this category?

or am i missing something in my old age?!

also, the part about her death seems a little jerky...

Simply put you need to write more.

Author on some of that stuff we smoked in Vietnam perhaps ? That made everything humerous but without some sweet mary jane I could not find any humor or satire here

Great job! Super exciting!

Great job! Super exciting!

This was funny? WTF?? I must be missing the point entirely, because I find your protagonist to be a worthless POS with the self preservation instincts of a flatworm. What exactly did I miss here? Someone clue in an ‘Old Fart’. Thanks in advance.

Definitely want to read more about the aunt, and new adventures with the cousin!

One critique would be that it jumped very quickly in to the D/s dynamic, I think Nick would put up a little more of a fight. Otherwise, thoroughly enjoyed it :)

This would have been great as a first installment to a series.

So it may have been placed in the wrong category but why were so many people crying about it?

It was a good story, well written and people with half a brain and imagination would have enjoyed it.