All Comments on 'Aunt Clara's Visit'

Awesome next chapter please

Many word errors!

I'm gonna have some fun now

He thinks about himself only, and has the finesse of a 12 year old who watches a lot of porn confusing it with the real world.

I think the word you're looking for is "Admonished", not "Abolished".

...but not great, either. Prfsr was right: Abolish and Admonition are not synonymous. A good edit could have greatly improved on this story.

Also, rightbank sounds like a woman who doesn’t like to yield control. The kid in this story took very good care of his auntie. He patiently seduced first her mind, then her body, and stuck around for the cuddle. That an 18 year old showed his age by verbally high-fiving himself is funny, not reprehensible.

I liked it. I hope you plan to write more on these two.

Some minor errors - reread before posting. Look forward to future adventures - keep the storyline going

Who have read, liked, and commented. Hope this story quickened your heart a bit. You've all inspired me to write more. Again, many thanks.

All aunts and nephews should experience such uninhibited love

Please continue , love your stories

But, there is a big difference between “admonished” and “abolished.”