All Comments on 'Aunt Dorothy Takes My Virginity'

I had a few previous stories proofread, they were changed beyond recognition. So now I just write it how I think it. If people enjoy them then that’s great. If they want perfection then my stories and Literotica is nit really the place for them.

J.K. Rowling, Shakespeare etc are all available to read, and apparently they are perfect.

My writing is just a bit of fun, no more than that. I’m not looking for praise.

Thanks for your feedback.

Don't worry about mechanics, worry about thoughts.

Hornacek.

Did you read what I said before the story began?

I clearly said it’s more TABOO than incest.

This category is incest/TABOO

This story is TABOO

Is it clear to you yet? It’s TABOO, TABOO, TABOO.

Thanks for sharing.

Every so often a good realistic story turns up and I'm sure this story has been true thousands, if not millions, of times. I like this, I feel this and I wonder if it is true.

Despite the introduction the grammar police stick their f*****g oar in. Ingore the ignorant posters, especially the anonymous, and write what you feel. I agree about editors changing the story beyond recognition, I have been there and won't go back.

Nice story, I once had a comment about taboo/incest, couldn't be bothered replying to it!

Nice story

Very nice, I’m looking forward to reading the rest.

Lovely stuff, cannot wait to read the rest :)

Very hot story! It ticks all my boxes 👅💦

Hi does anybody have aunt Dorothy address cos I’ve just come home from school with a boner