All Comments on 'Aunt Em Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
........and?

What's the point of starting a story without it at least having some form of action?

At this rate by Episode 10 he will kiss her!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

good start, kept the reader looking for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Shame

That is, it's a pity we didn't actually get to 'The First Time'. Promising start but I'll not be looking out for Ch.02:03:04 etc

oldwayneoldwayneover 12 years ago
I'll rate it when I've read it all.

We'll be waiting.

The MouseThe Mouseover 12 years ago
Good start

Unlike some others, I like the anticipation and build-up of this story. Looking forward to many more chapters.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 12 years ago
I'll wait for the rest

I'm with Oldwayne, I'll wait to se the rest of the story.

MrBill36MrBill36about 9 years ago
Good Aunt/Bad Aunt

Auntie Em is a very nice and understanding Auntie. This may prove to be an interesting Holiday for John and Auntie Em.

OseekerOseeker10 months ago

Intrigued but moving slowly...

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