All Comments on 'Aunt Helen Ch. 02'

I've thoroughly enjoyed your tale so far. I'm looking forward to more chapters.

there are a number of typos that spell check won't catch (like instead of lick for example). But great story. Looking forward to additional chapters

as everyone who reads this story will want to run to the store and "stock up" so that they can try this at home. What a great way to celebrate.

This should have been proofed before posting because there are a bunch of typos that should have been caught. Not sure why you would use "swallowed his pecker juice" to describe something that should be so hot and sensual, but it just made me laugh when I read it. Feels a bit juvenile.

She liked his cock. No she licked hus cock clean.

Missing words and missing letters at the ends of words.

Slow down when writing and think about what you're writing.

Re-read it and change what doesn't look right before posting.

It's a basic story with no description of the main characters.

That accompanied by basic writing makes it poor.