All Comments on 'Aunt Hester Stays for a Visit'

Keep developing the story and definitely expand on hester's cravings to be humiliated and used.

This is an excellent beginning and I'm looking forward to what follows. Some more physical description of the participants would be welcome

When I started reading this story it felt like it should have been a "part 2" because not until further into the story are we introduced to who Rita is and the fact that she is the daughter. As the author, you know who the characters are but we don't, take a minute to introduce your characters instead of making us guess.