All Comments on 'Aunt Julie'

Well composed,very well written,no stupid or lurid lapses,it is a pity that you left it so long to start writing again.There is only one very minor thing that I can say,and of course its only my opinion,the sex could be more detailed and drawn out.This story is crying out for a sequel ,I hope you carry on with more about these two.

Straight forward erotica,we dont know several things for instance how long and why he is staying,history of their relationship etc.But one thing we do know ,there is plenty of ways this could go.Erotica is certainly not new to you.More of this please.

I think you write quite well, erotically, too. The only typo I noticed:

She had to know, to, what sort of thoughts were in his head. ==> to know, too ... Please keep writing!

This is the real thing,I was totally fixated by my aunts tits[she was also my godmother],my mother and her were sisters.I never really thought about sex with my mother ,but I certainly did with my aunt,she had lost her own son in childbirth and could not have another child.She totalled spoiled me and as I went through a divorce went everywhere with me,my uncle had died at a very early age.Just like this story things came to a head after we returned home from a party ,lets put it this way by the morning her tits were no longer a mystery to me.No harm was done ,in fact she was so much fun.When she died I was devastated.I hope you write more it has brought back such happy memories for me

Write like this and substitute mom for aunt then see the response you get,a very erotic story, very well written.

You want to fxxx me dont you ,what a question who wouldnt?Hope to read more from you I ,had a spell where I got really pissed off with women[no I didnt turn gay]women are a bloody menace when they get it into their heads to become a ladette.It soon passes and I am back to my normal self I have always loved women bi or whatever,far prefer their company than a bunch of men half pissed and bragging about what or who they have screwed.

He said no?

Excellent. Next part, please!