by nickatnight
The build-up was unhurried and increasingly sexy and i enjoyed it very much.Would like to hear more.
Dave
this is amazing!
Too short but sweet. I loved the writing and the theme. looking forward to part II. Hurry up.
Great story.......so far..... How's about another chapter??
Loved it. Nice buildup well written. I just want more. !
I echo Louise: Don’t stop now!