All Comments on 'Aunt May'

This story is just as good as it was the first time I read it, years ago. Did you re-post or did you steal it? I'd swear it's here, someplace.

I loved this the first time I read it in October of 2003. Why the repost?

I thought it was lovely....so well written, I had never seen it before, but I loved it.

GREAT STORY BUT IT IS TRUE IT IS A WORD FOR WORD COPY JUST SAW THE QRIGNAL I HAD LONG AGO READ THE NIGHT BEFORE LAST IT IS A GOOD STORY BUT I AM CURIOUS IF YOU ARE A REPOST OR A THEFT THE WAY TO FIND THE ORIGINAL IS TO LOOK UP SPECIFIC STORIES CLICK ON INCEST STORIES USING KEY WORDS AUNT MAY MOM REWARD SECRET SHOULD PUT IT ON A LIST TO READ

Hello Kirk482002,

Even while it is a repost (I know you submitted it before unther the same writersname) it's still a nice story. It puzzles me why you dit repost it though.

regards

Evert

Legally, they are still aunt and nephew. They fact that they aren't blood relatives doesn't change the fact that they are still relatives and close ones at that. It's a nice little fantasy, but that's all it is.

You have done an excellent job, truly a great read, pay no attention to those who want to talk about the technical side of things. This entire story was written with heart, and love, do it again, and soon.

You are correct that this a story that appeared on Lit in October of 2003. I know because I'm the author. I pulled it around this time last year along with fifteen other stories that I was going to have published as an anthology.

Since then I have been repeatly asked to e-mail Aunt May to people that didn't have it saved. I finally decided to repost it. It had been off the boards too long to be considered an edited version, so I asked Lit if I could resubmitt it and they saw no reason not to allow it back on.

The final reason was that of all my stories, hands down, this is my favorite.

In hindsight I should have noted that it was a repost. I'm sorry if I shook anybody up thinking I copied someone else's work and flattered that so many of you really remembered it.

One final note... yes they can get married.

Kirk

Stealing away her girlfriends' boyfriends just for the "conquest." Some friend. Not someone I'd want to associate with, no matter how good looking she may be.

And Jack couldn't go to Atlantic City because he had to work, but went anyway. Left them shorthanded at the pool, didn't he? So why didn't he get fired?

I'm with May!

I don't care if May is a tease or not. She is HOT!

I noticed there weren't any windmills in this story. 'Tis a pity. Add some the next time you repost it.

Of course, if May was my Lady Dulcinea, she wouldn't be sucking and jerking other guys off. In fact she wouldn't be doing that to me either.

I'd be too busy singing and prancing and wondering how that donkey was going to hold up Sancho's immense ass.

"I am I Don Quixote.. The Lord Of La..."

Huh, what? The barber's coming? Quick hide this...He's not getting the fucking hat back...

Later...

Man

This story is completely amazing, it had me laughing and crying. Thank you for reposting 'Aunt May'. Your writing is incredible, and 'Aunt May' is no exception.

I guess she was just having fun when she stole her girlfriend's boyfriends. No wonder she didn't have too many friends in college. She was pissing off too many girls by being a bitch and pissing off too many guys by being a tease.

I like the fact that they are in love and going to be together forever, but with the way she teases, I don't see the guy being very happy with it.

Beyond excellence! Well told!

This was the first time I read it and I loved it. I like the way you took your time to build up the tension and to develop the story slowly. Please disregard the nit-pickers, what the hell! It's a story! a fantasy! Reading it you taught me several things, Thank You. Ronnie W.

touching, not just an erotic event description, but an enjoyable story. great job!

... is that it is a real story with a plot. It was developed well and it was actually believable. Most of the stories I've read here are good, and some of the sex scenes written by the better authors are explosively erotic, but most of them fail to either make me hate or root for the main character(s). To a serious reader it can change the feel of a story.

I found myself feeling bad for both Jack and May, which means at that point in the story I gave a shit.

Of course, I kind of felt they would wind up together from the tag line in the story. But it was nice they way you worked it out.

After reading an earlier comment about them not being able to get married, I looked into it. What I can gather from the laws of my state (PA), you can marry any person that isn't related to you by blood, as long as they are of legal age and you aren't already married. A step-aunt would qualify as non-blood related. Maybe that reader thought she was a half-aunt.

All I know is that this was a very good story and the only step-aunt I have (Edna) doesn't quite fit May's shoes.

Thanks,

Wayne

Definitly one of the best storys I've read on this site, hope you keep writing em...

I loved this piece. Please continue presenting your work here.

man I love it it was hot and great good going

One of the best stories on this site. very well done

Arguably the best story I've read on here - I didn't know whether to cry or cum!!!!!

except that at the end, my cock goes limp and my mouth hung open 'wat da fuck, is this a drama or erotic story?'

i'm definitely not gonna cry!!!!!

Great Story...One Of The Best I Have Seen...Great Plot And Storyline...5 Stars....Hope To See More From You...

I DON'T NORMALLY READ INCEST STORIES, BUT AM I GLAD I READ THIS ONE. I DON'T KNOW IF IT WAS REALLY INCEST OR NOT, BUT I DO KNOW IT WAS A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN STORY. I THINK THE APPROPRIATE WORD IS HEARTWARMING. THANKS FOR WRITING.

60 Year Old George

I loved this story even the ending which some did not. It is a fantastic story.

it should have been in the romance section. There was no incest, and a lot of readers probably never had the chance to read this fine story.

I really love ones like these.

Kinda gets you right in the heart.

And in the penis.

I hope that's a true story. As much as I'm turned on by the great sex, especially the incest stories, this one takes the cake. Very nice! Go Jack!

Definitely a keeper.

I really enjoyed the story - I am a sucker for happy endings. My only quibble is that none of the other children knew about May - for this to be realistic, Jack's mom would have to be at least ten to fifteen years older than the other children. Anyway, I won't fuss about it too much. All in all, a very good story.

Says right there that there's a 15 year gap between the mother and her oldest sibling

Can't read.

Nice story!!

Good job on the story. Easy reading and good pacing. Is there more?

Kirk, Life is more than sex, love is more than sex. You included it all in your wonderful story. I'm sure the happy ending brought tears to many of your readers. Don.

well that's something i bet other readers never saw coming eather

If they had 10 stars this one would get it from me. I don't know if you could have done any better. You had me captivated from the start. What a buildup you did. You played each piece of the story like a chess match. I was just sorry to see the writing come to an end. Fantastic job!

This a great & sensitive story, just not long enough.

I just love this story, not so much as an erotic story, but almost as I novel. As other readers... I would love to read more from you. Hope someday you write a bigger story, so we can all enjoy more from your writings.

This story has captured my heart in ways I didn't think a story could. This is simply incredible

Fine storytelling in the coming of age genre. If I was being ultra critical (aka I AM going to be ultra critical - sorry!), the ‘sex scenes’ were too brief in my opinion, but otherwise great story

one of the nicest incest story i have read please write more like this

It was a great story one of the best I have read on here it had a happy ending keep them coming you r a great writer thank you

Great story. I loved it. I love a story with body and a happy ending. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your stuff!!!!!! Again keep up the good work.

Ahh, loved this story. To be fair, I kinda saw where this was going as soon as the mom started the talk with the son and wasn't immediately mortified. That said, this was a piece about love, not just about sex and lust. The fact that May was saving herself for Jack (and vice versa) without even realizing it at first was something special. The fact that they were close enough in age to make it sorta realistic was cool too. Nice job

Sorry, but the ending of the story couldn't fix the teasing and the condom at the beginning. 1*

wow never saw that coming the story one o the best ive ever read .im a grown man and a biker at that and the ending had me with a tear in my eye , im glad it worked out the way it did . great story keep it up

Absolutely wonderful, can't imagine a stronger love story. Now I have to check if you have more stories this good. Lol