by hancock75
All aunts and nephews should experience such beautiful uninhibited love.
Alwaystaboo
Nice writing to this awesome story. She sound like a lady be awesome to make love too
Can't wait to get his cock in her. Wait until Mom finds out. He has Aunt, Mom, and Sister to practice on later.
I always prefer a build up, making them work for it before their passions over take them. All and all a good start
From an intro describing a relationship with his aunt where the closest one get to sex is Sox, they are suddenly, without any erotic prelude or any kind of prededing interchange, engaged in erotic exercises in bed. What gives?
This guy is moving to stay with his aunt for a long time, so the author should not need to be in such an hurry. Rather than going directly to what is really an older woman out of the blue raping her nephew, he (and the readers) should be allowed some kind of build up of tension and arousal.
or simmering sexual tension
It's scary to think where this pace will take us
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Looking forward to following chapters. I hope they are as hot. Thanks for sharing.
I normally dislike stories where they start and then, with what should be a weeks or months long seduction or build up, turns into an almost immediate fuck-fest. However, you’ve effectively used the veil of “sleep” to turn what likely would have been a wet dream into a not too far fetched reality. We’ll played!! BTW, if there are not sequels to this story you’ve blown a great opportunity.
Great potential for continuation in another chapter. One of the other commenters was pretty accurate concerning the somewhat over accelerated plot line. Ending was a little too abrupt for my liking.
Great story, I also would have liked a build up, seduction, but still believable.