All Comments on 'Aunt Nina's Swimsuit'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

It's only Thursday, and Mom won't be there until Tuesday... I'm sure they'll have time for more hot, regrettable sex until his Mother catches them and punishes them for their wickedness.

You never seem to disappoint your readers.

Nedthebundler

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 7 years ago
Great flow

Story line is real and very sexual. A lucky aunt and nephew

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

mother must discover - seriously reprimand then join in

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
cannot stop.

You cannot stop this story here, there is too much potential to end it like this.

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyover 7 years agoAuthor
ref a continuation to this

okay. i have a project to finish first, but will think up how to include the mother/sister character.

raretoastraretoastover 7 years ago

Good writing but you wrote to much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Keep going

Beside mother/sister characters, until their Tuesday arrival, please consider more aunt options, like sexy dress to kill for example, but keep the slightly non reluctant aunt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Non-fiction

Are you sure this is "fiction"? You sound way too much like the way my son has been ogling my sister ever since he got back from college. Maybe I should simply print out the story, slip it under his sheets when he's out to work, and let him find your little "surprise" there, waiting for him, egging him on to go all the way.

But if it IS fiction, you sure do have a very firm grasp of reality and how women feel about incest.

Which is GREAT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
GOOD STORY!

End it on a high note. Don't add unless you can commit to a solid second story with more backround.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
please continue.

I'd love to see the rest of the week.

Kirby17Kirby17about 6 years ago
Ref a continuation

Bloody good story and it definitely needs a follow up.

He should carry on shagging his aunt over the weekend and THEN he gets caught in mid-fuck by his mother (who got an earlier flight or whatever). Recriminations, tears, etc - but then his mother comes round to the fact that three-way incest might be a lot of fun after all! I'll leave the rest up to your imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great

Oh No... It can't end here.. There has to be more..

cryhwks72cryhwks72about 5 years ago
Please make another chapter.

Please make another chapter, there's a lot of potential here. They have an entire week until the Mom gets there.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
It was very hot!!!!!!!. ^*!^*!^*!

CRAIG ,!!!!!!! what a con-artist .Next chapter ,maybe he gets his mom. And knocks-up aunt Nina ,and maybe even mom Good read.

THANKS

Nutman99Nutman99over 4 years ago

What an amazing nephew. First helping your aunt with the sunscreen then helping her with your cock. And I am sure sh enjoyed every bit of it. Hopefully you have the chance to fuck her brains out again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Cumming inside his aunt hope he knocked her up on purpose I knocked up my aunt Rachel when on two week vacation together.told my aunt your having my kid to and moving in with me she wears garter belts nylons and has hairy cunt and friends com over we fuck my pregnant aunt gangband bareback leave Mark's all over her tits and neck.friends said to me once she delivers we want to gangbang her knock her up with are kid in her.my aunt said no fucking me bareback.to Rachel you will let them cum in your cunt and ass let them knock you up give them three kids too

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Gave up....

With all the procrastination from Craig, over something quite bloody natural (apply suntan lotion)....I still kept reading, but should have given up

When it got to the point of his Aunt seeing his cock in his hand....such a shy dickhead, did nothing to conceal it...that was a totally unrealistic change from a shybe.

Lost all reason...could have been 50 better ways to get there.

Stopped reading straight away....totally lost me.

Don't know what others think, didn't bother reading the comments.

Normally, if I haven't got something nice to say, I keep it to myself, but this time, I wanted my time back....but already too late.

Disappointed.☹️

WatchedBethWatchedBethover 3 years ago
Fun

Made me laugh. Erotic story too x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Sorry, but I fall into the same category.....

...as the other Anon that was disappointed. ☹️☹️☹️

I gave up before the end of page one....☹️

I don't care how "SHY" a nephew is....no way will a horny one, not jump at the chance of putting suntan lotion on.... Was it four or five times he was asked...and still making stupid comments???

Not in a Western culture anyway.

That made it a pretty-much ridiculous, unbelievable story, so had to stop reading.

Same as the other comment....generally, if I've got nothing nice or constructive and purposeful to say...I just move on to the next story....but this time, I read the comments first....still wouldn't get back to the story though.

Better to let you know....if a kid jacks off at the thought of his Aunt, about one in a thousand would turn down such an opportunity (as suggested, requested and asked) or even feign embarrasment.☹️☹️🤔

Lost me completely, but thought I'd tell you why.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It was great!! Don't listen to the trolls. It could have had another chapter!!

BassNutt51BassNutt51about 2 years ago

Great story, thanks again for writing. All of your stories are really 🔥 hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very erotic and just how I would imagine an aunt would seduce her nephew, playing on his hormonal lust and desire for his beautiful aunt.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

He probrably knocked her up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

You have a great ear for dialogue and have knocked out a great short story. Hope your day job ends up in you getting paid for writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Hope you knocked up your aunt I knocked up my aunt Rachel now lives with me we fuck every day and night when we went to nudist resort she was off the pill got knocked up by group of black guys says wants more black kids put inside her

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