All Comments on 'Aunt Paula Ch. 1'

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Don't call it Ch. 01

I hate it when authors do that.

Makes me regret getting started when you can't finish.

I somehow made my way down the hall on shaky knees.

WTF was he doing, crawling

That was not worth reading

The real story was when he showed up for dinner. I think I'll demand my $100 be refunded.

I guess the writer lost his interest in the half way