All Comments on 'Aunt Phyllis'

great history-next chapters,please!

I thought this was supposed to be a turn on! I went into this story anticipating, and hard on ready! When I got through it, I was flacid... limper than a soggy hot dog!

Get help on your next one! Ideas are great... grammer is not!

How can you read somethig that is written so poorly?

sounds like those other fuckers should be at walmart buying a romance novel....go somewhere else ..we dont need negative bullshit in here......

Excellent story. Keep'em coming.

this was really poor. it lacked fluency and showed a poor grasp of language

Grammar and spelling are horrendous. No flow to the story. I got lost in several spots. Can't get much worse.

to those of you that liked this crap, for lack of a better word you and this moron should all go back to school and take english again... with such poor use of the english language I don't see how this crap got posted...

The sad state of your spelling and grammar is a dead give away that you are not from England, unless it is in the week previous to writing.

You have the basics of a good story. Clean up the spelling and grammar, and it has the makings of a story that most readers would enjoy.

I was thinking more of an Asian decent.

Most pathetic attempt at writing. Give it up.