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only in a sick dream. Your story should be just a little real to get a good comment

It had nothing I look for in a story plausible plot, relatable characters, or any real reason to care what happened- but hey, spontaneous incest with a wet-dream red-headed stacked aunt who happens to be a cop? Fetish rocket fuel, sir! 4.5*

A read that I have read before on this site at least twenty time. Thanks for sharing. If you do a part two put a little feeling into it.

I had to mark it. Unfortunately no zero available. Lacking in in even a basic seductive intro. Don't give up your day job because you can't write

Almost no character development, no real build up, no real plot.... Keep your day job.

I've had more satisfying sneezes that last longer than this 'story'...

It's short. What can you say for it? Answer; NOTHING A bid fat woopy. A sleeper but it's already DEAD. Redo this Stinker.

Don't listen to these other people. I really liked it. I got hard reading it.

I enjoyed this nice short story because sometimes the long story's get old and this was a nice change

you three super critics need to shit in one hand and barf in the other. it was good!!!

It was good i thoght it could have been longer, with a little bit of

dominance on the aunt's behalf

many many yrs ago I had an aunt carole I thought was the most sexiest lady around I was intreeged with her as a young boy I wanted to just nut her big time as the yrs went on I got older and still wanted to bang her big time as family is I was asked to go over during my teen yrs and help around the house cut her grass,rake leaves the usual and every time I wanted to bury my face in her tit's or pussy even spend night there just because well one day when I was like 19 I got my chance she'd been at our house getting a buzz on and asked me to drive her car and her home (bout a 15 min drive) it was late and I wasn't busy so off we went I got her home and helped her in the house next thing I know is were kissing and my hands are on them tit's she goes my goodness boy if i'd known back then what I know know i'd of let ya screw me yrs ago. we had a relationship for about 10 yrs .

Amazing story, mate. I imagine Aunt Sal looking similar to Christina Hendricks. I loved her description. I cummed buckets by the end.

Seriously? NO thought at all.

Nothing really sexy or erotic about it. Just short and to the point. Needs more much much more. This is more of an outline of a story, but needs all the filler.