by dan_kildall
Love this story! Can't wait for the next part. It would be cool if you included more of the toilet play. Love the dirty talk with 'mommy'.
I must be related to this family. Man, I was cumming just reading the story.
I've been a follower of this series since chapter 5 please dan you gotta make more its the one thing I look forward to when I'm pleasuring myself! 5/5
Not the biggest fan of the chaptered stories but I have been following since Ch. 1 and im loving it. Awesome work, 10/10. Was wondering when the father was gonna get involved. :) Keep up the great work.
The interaction is fabulous, well done, waiting/wanting for more
Great chapter, glad to see Danny's universe continue to expand. However, I do have a question for you.
With the entire family having come to accept incest is there a possibility of Sandi and Danny getting married at some point in the future?
Although I started following you from chapter 4, I have to say I'm overwhelmed that you bring such creativity to your novels and wonder how much is based on real life and how much is based upon fantasys wanting to happen. All I can say is keep up the good work and try to produce more, faster as I check up everyday to see if you have created another wonder but usually disapointed as i have to wait around 6-7 days. All in all great job!
Damn. This is amazing. I seriously cummed like 5 times in this chapter alone. Please hurry and update. I don't think I could handle havng to wait and masturbate to a different story. My pussy seems to like this one best. ;)
this series is fan-fucking-tastic i have read it multiple times and can't wait for more. it is really well thought out and i think it would also make a great Adult Video. hope you put up more soon as i really enjoy reading them
I have submitted Part 11 earlier today, so it should be available sometime next week. Thanks for your patience, and I have appreciated all the interest with people emailing me wondering when the next part was going to be published.
Sorry but I had to stop the series. Too many people and overlapping commitments/lines to the point you've departed reality. I was giving you 4 & 5* up to this chapter but I'm leaving this unrated and stopping. I enjoyed your ability to merge the sex and complex relationships in ways that made it believable. That is no longer the case... *
This is truly a well written, beautiful incestuous love story between mentally, emotionally and psy 5 star series without reservations,chologically mature individuals. The lack of guilt, shame, and jealousy between the adults is refreshing. The plot and subplots are logically developed and thus believable. In real life, I would love to know this family and wish I could be included in their lives.