by maltteezer
"Dale had an erection and from the feel of it was big.
......She was about to scold him and ask him what the hell he thought he was doing until she felt his tongue brush against her clit."
This section moves way too fast. Appears to be a lack of effort on your part.
W.T.F he calls her a slut but he waited till she was drunk before fuckin her so what does that make him?another dumbfuck who cant get a woman unless she's drunk
Very sloppy sentence structure and very poor description. Whole story points are missing.
Nothing quite like getting a great unexpected fuck and climaxing all over the place leaving the inside of your cunt all wet with a mixture of juices.
He'll do it agin. I bet.