All Comments on 'Aunty Tick Tock'

You've got a good base for another chapter. Please continue, this could get interesting.

Congratulations on jumping into the deep end with your first story -- I wish I had written it! Welcome, Guitarseaman, and please bring us more of your work. Five stars!

Take your time and control the pace, give it time to build to a climax.

Very good narration. Please give your time n build this story slowly .thanks for sharing

Appreciate the comments. Have written Chapter 1 of Hurricane Matthew (Incest and Taboo) and will alternate between the two and (smile) take it slow (The best way....isn't it).

Great beginning to the story! I'd love to see her thoroughly and completely dominate the young man. Keep up the great work!

It's a real teaser, looking forward to subsequent chapters. I do love a slow build up.

Thanks for sharing.