All Comments on 'Aural Fixation'

by ChancesAre

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 9 years ago
I'm hooked!

Quite possibly the sexiest story ever!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Great ! Beautifully written and erotic and believable

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Panama

Bloody Brilliant

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
"Aural"?

"Aural" refers to ears and hearing.

"Oral" refers to mouths and all the great things you described.

StarkravenStarkravenalmost 9 years ago
Style

Love your style :)

MICHAELG1963MICHAELG1963almost 9 years ago
wow

Simply love your writing style please continue to write more

metzermetzeralmost 9 years ago
Good sweet christ

I'm really enjoying this. Please continue to write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So hot

I don't normally comment on these stories but that was one of the hottest ones I've ever read.

It's a shame the previous anonymous commenter missed the title's symbolism. I thought 'aural fixation' was perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

please write a second part with michael involved

elron77elron77over 8 years ago
Delightful!

Erotic, sensual, and a refreshing departure from the the all-too-common plots and story-lines.

Thank you!

GregAtTheBeachGregAtTheBeachover 8 years ago
Hot! Hot! Hot!

Hot -- and witty and entertaining and brave and fun.

Thank you so much for sharing your story with us.

randn51randn51over 8 years ago
Sorry to see it end!

Looks like you have the makings of a multi chapter story. I hope you have the time and inclination to write more. I truly enjoyed this story so thank you!

gunmakergunmakerover 8 years ago

There is a difference between writing an erotic story and just writing a jerk off story. You my friend, write erotic literature. There are a number of others here that meet this lofty height. I hope you continue to bless us with your wild descriptions and wonderful story lines.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
perfect

Nice to read truly erotic story for once!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
One of the BEST!

I agree with some of the comments that have been made, YOU are a superb writer of erotica! This was sooo well done and I was blown away. I hope you can write a follow up on these two and the gentleman. THAT would be AWESOME!!! Great Job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thank you

I love your writing. Please write more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
No spelling errors.

Very nice. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice premise

Nice, long buildup. Nice dialog.

Would have liked to hear more where they were together.

Five stars.

AahhWhattheHellAahhWhattheHellabout 3 years ago

The description is just incredible. I have almost no idea what Mike Gracie, or Stacy look like. Blue eyes here, rosy handful pert breasts. 4 pages later. No measurements, no hair color. I was glued.

Incredible!!!!

tsgtcapttsgtcapt7 months ago

While not into les/homo sex, that was about the wildest thing I've read in a while!! Thanks!!

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Getting back into story telling again after trying some other writing projects. I just love the short story genre so much. Just submitted a new story- 'Sick in the Head' on 6/30. We'll see how soon it posts, hopefully by the weekend. Hope you like it.